The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
These maps depict
an information
about the development Remove the article
information
a piece of information
in
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of
the
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apply
road
access to a city
hospital between 2007 and 2010. it is clear from the maps that the city
hospital witnessed significant change to serve many people in the city
. According to
what is shown, within three years, the hospital experienced various changes such
as roundabout
, public car parking, and bus station. To elaborate, in the south pole of the hospital, the main Add an article
a roundabout
city
road
had edited
to contain one roundabout. Along the main hospital Add a missing verb
been edited
road
the bus parking was demolished and replaced by Add a comma
road,
bus
station which gave the employees more parking area in Correct article usage
a bus
south eastern
the hospital. Correct your spelling
southeastern
In addition
, the hospital road
developed
to have one roundabout rather than Add a missing verb
was developed
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the cross
cross
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crossroad
road
which make
it easier to turn back and provided a wide bath for buses. The significant change was in the east side of the ring Wrong verb form
made
road
, people had a wide area to park in and closer to the hospital.
To sum up
, we could say that the hospital had convenient transport in and out from
it, which Change preposition
of
increase
the capacity of the hospital, including Wrong verb form
increased
staffs
and patientsFix the agreement mistake
staff
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