The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The graphs indicate the modifications of the West Park Secondary
School
during a 60-year interval.
Overall
, it is explicit that it was the school
that has kept its initial location and form within the period; while
all the other facilities and surroundings have been changed.
In 1950, it can be seen that there were three houses next to the school
, at the front of the farmland. Also
, a large playground was built for the school
.
Focusing on 1980, what stands out from the scheme is that the farmland was changed into a sports field which was exactly behind the new car park and science block. It is obvious that all the houses were removed with the aim of constructing new accommodations.
Turning to 2010, the photo makes it clear that the area behind the school
almost halved to contain both the playground and sports field. Furthermore
, the space of parking was expanded significantly, however
, the school
and science block have maintained their shapes.Submitted by n97.mortazian on
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