The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graphs
compares
the rate of new Change the verb form
compare
shop
openings versus Use synonyms
closures
in a specific country over a period of 8 years.
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Overall
, it is evident that both Linking Words
shop
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closures
and openings reduced remarkably from 2011 to 2018.
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According to
the given graphs, more than 8000 Linking Words
shop
places had been opened in 2011 and it went down more than two times by 2012. After three years of an ascending trend, it reached almost 6000 new shopping openings. Use synonyms
Whereas
, companies’ willingness to open a new center decreased by 2015. The rate of a new mall starting stayed almost the same with 4000 shops until 2017, and in the following Linking Words
year
it went down by almost 25%.
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year,
On the other hand
, Linking Words
although
the Linking Words
shop
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closures
were about 6300 in 2011, after a brief reduction in 2012, it increased in 2013 and 2014, with 7100 and 6600 shops, respectively. Interestingly, there was a significant fall Use synonyms
for
removing Change preposition
in
of
these Change preposition
apply
centers
in 2015, and Change the spelling
centres
then
after a substantial rise to almost 5000 locations, the Linking Words
closures
phenomenon remained almost stable. In fact, approximately 5100 shops closed in 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, closures with synonyms.
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