The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graphs
compares
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the rate of new
shop
openings versus
closures
in a specific country over a period of 8 years.
Overall
, it is evident that both
shop
closures
and openings reduced remarkably from 2011 to 2018.
According to
the given graphs, more than 8000
shop
places had been opened in 2011 and it went down more than two times by 2012. After three years of an ascending trend, it reached almost 6000 new shopping openings.
Whereas
, companies’ willingness to open a new center decreased by 2015. The rate of a new mall starting stayed almost the same with 4000 shops until 2017, and in the following
year
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it went down by almost 25%.
On the other hand
,
although
the
shop
closures
were about 6300 in 2011, after a brief reduction in 2012, it increased in 2013 and 2014, with 7100 and 6600 shops, respectively. Interestingly, there was a significant fall
for
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removing
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these
centers
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in 2015, and
then
after a substantial rise to almost 5000 locations, the
closures
phenomenon remained almost stable. In fact, approximately 5100 shops closed in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, closures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 5 times.

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  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
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