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The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line chart given depicts the
number
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 of
inquiries
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 sent to the Tourist Information Office in one city via three ways of communication, which are in
person
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, by
letter
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/email, and by telephone, recorded for six months, from January until June 2011.
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, the
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 of tourists who made their
inquiries
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 by telephone and directly reached out in
person
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 to the office increased over the period. Meanwhile, email or
letter
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inquiries
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 became less popular. In January, the tourist information office received 900
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 by call,
while
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 just less than 800 letters and emails were received. Only slightly over 400 queries were made in
person
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. it is noteworthy that over the next three months, the telephone still remained
as
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the most popular
ways
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 to make
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,
at
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 approximately 1000
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. Meanwhile, the
number
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 of
inquiries
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 made directly in
person
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 experienced a significant growth, reaching 800 and surpassing the
number
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 of
inquiries
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 made by
letter
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 or email. From March to June, in a
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person
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person,
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inquiries
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 rose sharply and became the most prevalent method of inquiry.
In contrast
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, there were fewer people who sent emails or
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letter
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 to make
inquiries
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, with just under 400
inquires
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 in May and June.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, inquiries, person, letter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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