Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on society and individual to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some

people

argued

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argue

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that social media

platform

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platforms

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bringing

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bring

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formidable danger

on

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to

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society and

individuals

.I

am partly agree

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partly agree

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with

this

this

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apply

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point of view and we should look at both

positive

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the positive

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as well as

a negative

side

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sides

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to draw

the

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a

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conclusion. On

one

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the one

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hand,

from

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since

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the invention of mobile phones and computer, the usage of

the

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apply

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gadgets

is

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has

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increasing

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increased

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tremendously, with

this

the facilities of social networking sites has

also

taken the boom

from

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in

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last

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the last

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few years.

However

, the facilities provide good communication between the

persons

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people

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and

brought

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bring

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the world together.

For example

, with the help of Facebook,

people

from any

countries

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country

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can communicate with each

others

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other

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without any fences.

Moreover

, by efficient use of

this

site's

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site

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individual can

also

enhance their knowledge by learning new

language

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languages

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, understanding different cultures, and many more. Not only the social networking sites have a positive impact, but

also

they

provide

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have

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some gloomy

impact

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impacts

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also

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apply

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on society and

peoples

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people

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.

On the other hand

,

as

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social networking sites provide better communication, but it contains some negative impact

such

as

people

uses

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using

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this

site

to communicate with other

people

, but they cannot communicate with their family and friends properly as they spend more time on the computer and cell phones.

Also

, the ability of creativity is lost by

the

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individuals

.

In addition

,

this

kind of

site

also

lessens the concentration power of the

individuals

.

Furthermore

,

people

may face lots of problems and can

also

suffer from depression and anxiety, due

more

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to more

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usage of

this

site

. In conclusion,my take on

this

is

individuals

should use mobile phones directly and wisely,limit their

times

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time

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spending

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spent

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on surfing social

platform

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platforms

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and

settel

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settle

ur time to balance family and

entertaining

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entertainment

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,we

shouldnt

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shouldn't

addicted

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be addicted

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to mobile devices

instead

of spending time for family