The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003.
A glance at the two graphs provided reveals a comparison of the proportion of going to the cinema in Auckland between all ages and different age
groups
over the period of 8 years
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is evident that the most remarkable proportion of the number of people going to the movie theatre belonged to the year 2001, the figures for 14 years
old to 23 years
old took up the first rank proportion of the groups
of various age.
In terms of the population visits to the cinema data, no other proportions were as high as in 2001, which accounted for 80%, followed by the years
1997, 1999 and 2003 were similar percentage
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percentages
with
72%. Meanwhile, the year 1995 made up the least significant number with 67%.
With regard to the diversity of age Change preposition
of
groups
, there was a slight homogenous trend observed in all groups
, except for the initial point and the growth level. Whereas
they began at from just 9 to merely 10 in 1995, Although
they elevated steadily, they declined abruptly and stood at from about 9 to only 10 over period of 8 years
. Moreover
, it dropped suddenly from 10.3 to 8.3 between 1995 to 2003.Submitted by thvana236 on
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