The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Vrite at least 150 words.
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The graph gives reached a peak, washing machine
the
information Correct article usage
apply
Change preposition
on that
that
proportion of households Correct determiner usage
the
use
electrical products in terms of 3 different ways and results on how long Correct pronoun usage
that use
did
Unnecessary verb
apply
housework
spent on Use synonyms
housework
in a period of 99 years.
It’s readily apparent that all electrical appliances became more popular, Use synonyms
in particular
refrigerators and vacuum cleaners, The total time spent doing Linking Words
housework
has Use synonyms
also
declined steadily and dramatically in the Linking Words
last
one hundred years.
In 1920, Linking Words
people
who Correct article usage
the people
use
washing machine was , more regular, Wrong verb form
used
whereas
vacuum cleaner was just 1%, and Linking Words
refrigerator
was 30%. Add an article
the refrigerator
However
, the proportion of refrigerator Linking Words
rise
dramatically in six decades,Wrong verb form
rose
Correct word choice
and
Correct word choice
while others
others
appliances was a very large majority. In 2019, Households with refrigerators and vacuum cleaners Correct quantifier usage
other
take
100%in Wrong verb form
took
humans
life, Change the noun form
human
in contrast
,Linking Words
Add an article
the
a
was
less to be used about 65%.
Unnecessary verb
apply
In
Change preposition
As
the
Correct article usage
a
results
, Fix the agreement mistake
result
amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
doing
Unnecessary verb
apply
housework
Use synonyms
was
gradually Verb problem
apply
decline
from 1920 to 2019. Wrong verb form
declined
While
people doing Linking Words
housework
with electrical appliances Use synonyms
instead
of by themself, the proportion of these two data were completely trend Linking Words
difference
. In 1920, the percentage of Replace the word
different
Use synonyms
housework
was under Add an article
the housework
a
half, Correct article usage
apply
then
Linking Words
fall
Wrong verb form
fell
into
20% in 1960, Change preposition
to
until
2019 the number was approximately 12%.Correct word choice
and until
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words housework with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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