the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
The illustrations reveal changes in a bookstore which have taken place since 2000.
Overall
, the store became much Linking Words
entertaining
, Correct quantifier usage
more entertaining
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then
it was in 2000.
In 2000, the bookstore was a much boring venue without any entertainment, but during, the next years the bookshop experienced a number of superb changes.The most noticeable alter is occurring Correct your spelling
than
of
a cafe, which was accompanied by replacing Change preposition
in
books
about cookery, hobbies and art to Use synonyms
a
left side of an entrance. Three tables appeared in a venue, where these Correct article usage
the
books
stood. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, fiction Linking Words
books
on a corner were substituted by non-fiction Use synonyms
books
. Use synonyms
As a
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result
quantity of Add a comma
result,
shelfs
Correct your spelling
shelves
shelf
in
the left side of the entrance became Change preposition
on
significantally
more Correct your spelling
significantly
Linking Words
then
in 2000.Replace the word
than
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