You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
The line chart illustrates the number of
visitors
in three categories of places in Europe from 1987 to 2007. Overall
, mostly total of tourists increased over the period
given; and at the end
, the highest can be seen on the coast, conversely
to the mountains that be
the lowest,
In the beginning, the Wrong verb form
are
quantity
of people who visited the coastal beach was high compared to the other site categories at 40,000; Change the quantifier
number
however
, in 1992, it gradually declined to about 350,000 visitors
and then
significantly increased until reached a peak of around 750.000 in the last
period
shown.
Compared to the lowest number of visitors
in the first period
given, the lakes had had visitors
just at
10,000Change preposition
apply
,
but significantly rose and reached the peak of about 70,000 tourists in 2002. Remove the comma
apply
Nevertheless
, it fell down dramatically to 50,000 in 2007. On the other side, the mountains were visited by 20,000 people during 1987. Besides
, these areas had Correct article usage
a gradualgradually
gradualgradually
number of Correct your spelling
gradual gradually
visitors
over the period
given and rose slowly until around 350,000 of
tourists in 2007.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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