The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
quantity
of overseas Change the quantifier
number
visitors
to three different places which is
the coast, the mountains, and the lakes area in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
European
country between 1987 and 2007. It is measured in Add an article
a European
thousand
.
Fix the agreement mistake
thousands
Overall
, In the given line graph, it is observed that the number
of visitors
to the lakes increased faster than those to the mountain or coastal areas. However
, the number
of visitors
to the lakes decreased towards the end.
To begin
with, firstly
, the lake area started with only ten thousand
visitors
in 1987, but that number
rose to around 40,000 in 1997. However
, there was a significant change in 2002 when the number
of visitors
reached a maximum of around 75,000. This
is the highest tourist number
compared to the other two areas. It's amazing to see how popular the lake area has become over the years. while
they get to fall in to
50, 000 in 2007.
Join the words
into
Secondly
, the number
of foreign visitors
to the mountain has been on the rise. According to
the data, in 1987 there were only around 20000 visitors
, but by 2007 that number
had increased to almost 35 thousand
.
Further
, The number
of visitors
to the coast decreased between 1987 and 1992, from 40000 to 350000 respectively. However
, by 2007, there was growth of up to 75 thousand
visitors
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