The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the
quantity
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number
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of overseas
visitors
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to three different places which
is
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are
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the coast, the mountains, and the lakes area in
European
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a European
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country between 1987 and 2007. It is measured in
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thousand
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thousands
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.
Overall
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, In the given line graph, it is observed that the
number
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of
visitors
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to the lakes increased faster than those to the mountain or coastal areas.
However
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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to the lakes decreased towards the end.
To begin
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with,
firstly
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, the lake area started with only ten
thousand
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visitors
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in 1987, but that
number
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rose to around 40,000 in 1997.
However
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, there was a significant change in 2002 when the
number
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of
visitors
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reached a maximum of around 75,000.
This
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is the highest tourist
number
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compared to the other two areas. It's amazing to see how popular the lake area has become over the years.
while
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they get to fall
in to
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into
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50, 000 in 2007.
Secondly
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, the
number
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of foreign
visitors
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to the mountain has been on the rise.
According to
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the data, in 1987 there were only around 20000
visitors
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, but by 2007 that
number
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had increased to almost 35
thousand
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.
Further
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, The
number
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of
visitors
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to the coast decreased between 1987 and 1992, from 40000 to 350000 respectively.
However
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, by 2007, there was growth of up to 75
thousand
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visitors
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, thousand, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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