The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
quantity
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number
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of overseas
visitors
to three different places which
is
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are
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the coast, the mountains, and the lakes area in
European
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a European
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country between 1987 and 2007. It is measured in
thousand
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thousands
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.
Overall
, In the given line graph, it is observed that the
number
of
visitors
to the lakes increased faster than those to the mountain or coastal areas.
However
, the
number
of
visitors
to the lakes decreased towards the end.
To begin
with,
firstly
, the lake area started with only ten
thousand
visitors
in 1987, but that
number
rose to around 40,000 in 1997.
However
, there was a significant change in 2002 when the
number
of
visitors
reached a maximum of around 75,000.
This
is the highest tourist
number
compared to the other two areas. It's amazing to see how popular the lake area has become over the years.
while
they get to fall
in to
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50, 000 in 2007.
Secondly
, the
number
of foreign
visitors
to the mountain has been on the rise.
According to
the data, in 1987 there were only around 20000
visitors
, but by 2007 that
number
had increased to almost 35
thousand
.
Further
, The
number
of
visitors
to the coast decreased between 1987 and 1992, from 40000 to 350000 respectively.
However
, by 2007, there was growth of up to 75
thousand
visitors
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, thousand, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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