The best way to solve the world‘s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, the

world

's environment has been affected

due to

many reasons. Some claim that hiking the

price

of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

petroleum

products

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

is

show examples

the best

solutions

Fix the agreement mistake

solution

show examples

to cure the

world

's environmental

issue

. In

this

essay, I will explain why I do not agree with

this

statement and provide examples to support my position.

To begin

with, increasing the amount of

fuel

products

cannot solve the environmental

issue

.

This

is because of

demand

Correct article usage

the demand

show examples

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

fuel

around the

world

,

still

Add a comma

still,

show examples

now many individuals are

used

Wrong verb form

using

show examples

petroleum

products

based on

vehicles

instead

of using

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

electricity eco-friendly

vehicles

.

For instance

, electronic car's

price

Fix the agreement mistake

prices

show examples

are more expensive than traditional based on

fuel

used cars and vans,

therefore

, many users use

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

petroleum based

Add a hyphen

petroleum-based

show examples

on

vehicles

and they do not have any supportive choices

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

eco-friendly cars. These are the reasons for increasing the

fuel

price

cannot reduce the environmental issues.

Furthermore

, hiking the

fuel

price

cannot cure the environmental

issue

Fix the agreement mistake

issues

show examples

around the

world

,

in contrast

, it

makes

Verb problem

creates

show examples

Correct article usage

a worst

show examples

worst

Correct word choice

worse

show examples

situation.

This

is because

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

people

rush to buy more

fuels

Fix the agreement mistake

fuel

show examples

on

Change preposition

for

show examples

their everyday needs and they do not consider the amount of

fuel

whether

increase

Fix the agreement mistake

increases

show examples

or

decrease

Fix the agreement mistake

decreases

show examples

.

For example

, in Vietnam, the government hikes the

fuel

price

but

people

rush to buy more

petroleum

products

because

this

Change the determiner

these

show examples

conventional oils are an imperative

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

their everyday activities like going to

office

Correct article usage

the office

show examples

, school, college, hospital and any place.

This

oil is

must

Correct article usage

a must

show examples

for

people

Change noun form

people's

show examples

everyday

life

Fix the agreement mistake

lives

show examples

until alternative eco-friendly

vehicles

are become

Change to the active voice

become

have become

show examples

inexpensive.

To conclude

, raising the

petrolem

Correct your spelling

petroleum

petrol

price

cannot solve the

world

's environmental

issue

Fix the agreement mistake

issues

show examples

besides

it will create more demand in order to

people

rush to purchase more and more to satisfy their everyday activities.

Therefore

, I do not agree with

this

statement in the

above- mentioned

Correct your spelling

above-mentioned

show examples

details.

This

drives

Fix the agreement mistake

drive

show examples

bring

Correct subject-verb agreement

brings

show examples

more drawbacks to society.