The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The table shows information about the changes in people who visited for national travel in kind of areas
such
as Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe, the Middle East, and Total in 1990,1995,2000 and 2005. As can be seen from the table, it is obvious that there is an increase in the figure in every country year on year. In detail, there are the least changes in visitors in the Middle East, with 9.8 in 1990 and
then
this
figure gradually rose, with 11.3, 13.5, and 15.8 in 1995, 2000, and 2005, respectively.
Also
, Africa has a growth rate similar to the Middle East. Meanwhile, Europe has the highest number of travellers, accounting for approximately 280 in 1990,
then
there was a dramatic increase in
this
number in 2005 with 400. Looking in detail, America is the only country which has a drop in the change rate of visitors in 2005 with 113.2,
while
the year before it was 118.2.
Lastly
, Asia and the Pacific started at 60.2 and ended at 135.8.
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