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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the count of the
population
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 in the Philippines,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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 living in cities during the period 1970 until 2020 and the data shows projections for 2030 and 2040. In general, the
population
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 in the four countries had almost increased during the period 1970 to 2020.
Moreover
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, the projection of
population
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 will be increased in 2030 and 2040. Regarding the historical data on
population
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 density in cities, we can see the highest
population
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 was
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, which the number of the
population
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 approximately 32% of the total
population
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 followed by
Malaysia
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 in less than
third,
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Thailand
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 in closer than a fifth, and
Indonesia
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 in less than a fifth of the total
population
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.
Besides
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 that, the
gap
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 in
population
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 between
Indonesia
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 and
Thailand
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 at the starting point was 4% but the
gap
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 increased in 2020, and the
gap
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 reached a fifth.
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, the Phillippines and
Malaysia
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 had a 2%
gap
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 in the percentage but in 2020 had a
gap
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 of 30%. In terms of the projection populations in four countries, we can get information the highest
population
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 living in urban is
Malaysia
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 followed by
Indonesia
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, the Phillippines, and
Thailand
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, where the urban people in 2040 reached approximately 80%, 60%, 50%, and 45%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, gap with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Trend analysis
  • Predictive models
  • Population distribution
  • Percentage change
  • Statistical comparison
  • Growth rate
  • Anomaly
  • Migration
  • Economic development
  • Baseline
  • Continuations
  • Urban population
  • Decline
  • Fluctuation
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