The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing processes for making instant noodles.

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, it can clearly be seen that there are 8 stages of manufacturing. It starts with bringing the flour from the storage and ends with labelling them. In terms of the beginning of the process, flour is brought from storage silos by a truck. Following that, it is being mixed with water and oil by a mixer. The next stage is making that into dough sheets using a roller machine before it should change them into sough strips. After that, the noodle strips are shaped into discs, which is followed by cooking in oil and drying them. Regarding the remaining processes, noodles are put into cups and added with vegetables and spices. The

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stage is labelling the cups with a labelling machine

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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3 paragraphs

134 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

manufacturing process
mixing ingredients
dough preparation
sheeting
steaming
cutting techniques
dehydration
deep-frying
cooling system
packaging
quality control
production line
mass production
food preservation
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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity ,improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

many people around the world use social media to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

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