The Diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pie.
The diagrams illustrate the production of a frozen fish pie. A fish pie, stored in a microwaveable container, consists of peas, sauce,
salmon
and potato. Both salmon
and potato are processed in the factory.
Potatoes can be processed in up to one month after being delivered. Potatoes will be cleaned before it is being
peeled and sliced into small pieces. The potatoes will Wrong verb form
they are
then
be boiled before being chilled until it is stored in the container.
On the other hand
, fresh salmon
needs to be immediately processed in less than 12 hours after being delivered to the factory. A lemon juice and salt will be applied to the fish meat until it is cooked in a steam oven. The factory worker will remove the skins and bones before one person is responsible for the inspection of the salmon
. Another step is to put the peas and sauce before the wrapping process and until it is stored or dispatched.Submitted by firmanrasyidi on
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