a magazine wants to include contributions from its reader for an article called "the book that influence me most" write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. in your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

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letter after reading an article in a magazine about sharing thoughts related to the

book

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that had a huge impact on my life. The name of the

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is " Mera Daghistaan" by Rasool Hamzatov. In brief, it tells the story of a young Dagestani man's journey to find his identity and purpose in life.

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book

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contains a lot of kindness and love for people and the fatherland. I like

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book

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as the characters in the novel are complex, and the story is both heartwarming and heartbreaking.

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book

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is a very engaging and unique account of the writer's personal life and love for the 'Avar' language. It is one of the most important books to read to remember the mother language. it is the best autobiography that provides aesthetic pleasure.

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is a

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for those people who love their motherland and language

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full of adventure,

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and romance

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and captures the unique culture of Daghistaan. I think

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information will be sufficient for your article. If you need any

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details, please let me know. Yours sincerely, Tajinder Singh

tajinder.panagSun Dec 17 2023

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Ensure the book description is clear and concise, directly addressing how the book fits into the theme.

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Expand on the explanation of how the book influenced you with specific examples or personal anecdotes for a more complete response.

coherence cohesion

Use cohesive devices effectively to create seamless connections between your ideas.

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Ensure a more appropriate formal greeting and complimentary close suited to the context of a letter to the editor.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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