Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Import and
export
of
fruits
and
vegetables
have been increased via air transportation, so that areas where
supply
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of
fruits
and
vegetables
is limited, or they ran out of session can be fulfilled. There are some pros related to availability and employment.
Also
, some
drawback
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drawbacks
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such
as expenses and diseases. The primary advantage of importing and exporting
of
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fruits
and
vegetables
,
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leads
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to
creates
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create
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strong
relationship
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relationships
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among countries by fulfilling the need
of
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required
product
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products
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and making
it
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them
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available to the residents of the country.
Also
, some countries lack appropriate climate conditions for some
fruits
and
vegetables
to be grown.
Moreover
, job vacancies are created in both countries owing to
import-
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export
. There are many workers
needed
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who need
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to work at ports and warehouses to ready the shipments for exporting. A survey by Delaware state was conducted, stating 60
percent
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of employment was increased
due to
ports in the cities as compared to other cities. Every coin has two sides, there are some drawbacks for the import and
export
. The first disadvantage can be related to increased expenses
due to
international shipping charges
of
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the products. There are many
fruits
and
vegetables
which are not affordable
by
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middle class
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people.
Fruits
such
as Kiwi and Dragon fruit in India, Pakistan,
Bangladesh
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and Bangladesh
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are very expensive and cannot be purchased by regular people on
daily
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basis. The second consequence is disease transfer is more likely to occur when buying imported
fruits
and
vegetables
.
For instance
, in 2020 some diseases were discovered in Australia after they received corn and wheat from Russia and after laboratory research same disease was already in Russia.
To sum up
, there are advantages of
import-
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export
such
as creating job vacancies and strong
relation
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but, some drawbacks
also
exist
such
as related to expenses and transfer of diseases.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export
  • import
  • perishable goods
  • carbon footprint
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • supply chain disruptions
  • economic benefits
  • culinary experiences
  • broader market
  • local produce
  • agricultural industries
  • external sources
  • competition
  • outcompete
  • vulnerable
  • high costs
  • freshness
  • accessibility
  • out of season
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