Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Import and
export
of fruits
and vegetables
have been increased via air transportation, so that areas where supply
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the supply
fruits
and vegetables
is limited, or they ran out of session can be fulfilled. There are some pros related to availability and employment. Also
, some drawback
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drawbacks
such
as expenses and diseases.
The primary advantage of importing and exporting of
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fruits
and vegetables
,
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apply
leads
to Verb problem
is
creates
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create
relationship
among countries by fulfilling the need Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
of
required Change preposition
for
product
and making Fix the agreement mistake
products
it
available to the residents of the country. Correct pronoun usage
them
Also
, some countries lack appropriate climate conditions for some fruits
and vegetables
to be grown. Moreover
, job vacancies are created in both countries owing to import-
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import-export
export
. There are many workers needed
to work at ports and warehouses to ready the shipments for exporting. A survey by Delaware state was conducted, stating 60 Wrong verb form
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percent
of employment was increased Change the spelling
per cent
due to
ports in the cities as compared to other cities.
Every coin has two sides, there are some drawbacks for the import and export
. The first disadvantage can be related to increased expenses due to
international shipping charges of
the products. There are many Change preposition
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fruits
and vegetables
which are not affordable by
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to
middle class
people. Add a hyphen
middle-class
Fruits
such
as Kiwi and Dragon fruit in India, Pakistan, Bangladesh
are very expensive and cannot be purchased by regular people on Correct word choice
and Bangladesh
daily
basis. The second consequence is disease transfer is more likely to occur when buying imported Correct article usage
a daily
fruits
and vegetables
. For instance
, in 2020 some diseases were discovered in Australia after they received corn and wheat from Russia and after laboratory research same disease was already in Russia.
To sum up
, there are advantages of import-
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import-export
export
such
as creating job vacancies and strong relation
but, some drawbacks Fix the agreement mistake
relations
also
exist such
as related to expenses and transfer of diseases.Submitted by sehbazsingh0001 on
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