The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the amount of individuals
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who participate
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participate
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participated
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in four different
type
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types
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of sports
a
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in a
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specific area between two years (1985 and 2005).
Overall
, we can
seen
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see
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that
,
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apply
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the number of people who
play
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played
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rugby
in
given
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a given
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first year
had
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was
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highest
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the highest
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amount
wheras
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whereas
the badminton players was
lowest
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the lowest
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and it
kept stay
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stayed
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place
in during
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for
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20 years.
Additionally
, in given
last
year the proportion of
tennis
player
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players
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had
highest
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the highest
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number.
To begin
with, in 1985, the male or
female
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females
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who
attend
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attended
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the
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apply
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rugby
sport
shown
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showed
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that the biggest rate
it
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apply
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was approximately 240 and
the
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apply
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tennis
followed
the
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apply
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rugby
and it was 150. The
people
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number of people
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who love
the
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apply
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basketball or badminton
was
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were
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a
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apply
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few
amount
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amounts
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and it was almost 75 and 52 relatively.
Furthermore
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Furthermore,
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the
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apply
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enrollment
of
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in
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basketball and badminton
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
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stayed
same
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the same
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in
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apply
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until 2005.
Tennis
participation
had
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has
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increased constantly. In 1995 the rate of
tennis
and
rugby
attenders
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attendees
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had
same
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the same
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quentity
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quantity
it was 200. After 1995, the portion of
rugby
subscribers
had
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apply
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decreased sharply.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rugby, tennis with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • participation rate
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • stable
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance
  • decline
  • steady growth
  • significant change
  • regional popularity
  • time period
  • sports activities
  • data representation
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