in some countries, owning a home rather than rentin one is very important for people. why might this be the case ? do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?

The necessity of shelter is an indisputable matter in every
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civilisation
civilization
. In some
region
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, the citizens' tendency is
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a house in comparison
wjth
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to
being
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. In my
opoint
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point
of view, it
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absolutely
depends on the
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governmental
and
economical
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policies in
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the country
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where you live. intrinsically, owning accommodation brings numerous avails for the landlords.
First,
you have a long-term investment which is highly worthable.
For example
, the statistics in Iran show that through
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20 years, the
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vacant
lands in the cities
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boundary
besides
the residences have the most growth rather than the stock market, precious metals or other comparable markets.
Second,
in
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the family can save more budget to
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in
other distinct area
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.
For instance
, they can afford more for
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excursion
exclusion
or providing more
convinient
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convenient
implementations for their dairies.
Thus
, owning a place to live regardless
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expences
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is profitable financially.
Nevertheless
, if
some one
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someone
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rent
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rents
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a home,
has
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this
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opportunity to choose
the
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location to be close to their occupation, school or accepted university and
facilitate
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reloction
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relocation
through the new situations, it will charge more cost on
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their
expenditures.
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consequent
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, they may discard some of their
ammusements
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amusements
amusement
or other parts of their life.
Moreover
, in some
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the tenant and landlord can not arrive at
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a copmromise
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copmromise
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compromise
in
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particular reasons. It may
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through lots of factors like financial or absence of consistency between both of them.
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of
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isseus
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issues
, the renters must
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consistantly
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consistently
which may cause colossal drawbacks for whole family members. In conclusion, if you live in a society with less
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and political constancy and house
conssume
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consume
as an investable commodity, it would be ingenuity to afford one.
Otherwise
, it would be suggested to rent to give yourself a wide range of choices which
is
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adapted
with
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your current status.
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