Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are competing views on whether advertising has an impact on us to buy things.
Although
,
advertisements are so common, I still think that we do not pay attention to them and advertising a product is Remove the comma
apply
persuade
us to shop by creating needs.
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persuading
People
are exposed to repetitive commercials everyday
. As advertising is now Replace the word
every day
on
Change preposition
apply
eveywhere
, Correct your spelling
everywhere
people
are no longor
can Correct your spelling
longer
avoid
. Correct pronoun usage
avoid it
As a result
, they perefer
not to pay any attention. For Correct your spelling
prefer
exmaple
, when Correct your spelling
example
people
wish relaxing
by watching a video on Change the verb form
to relax
youtube
, the first thing they encounter is Correct your spelling
YouTube
advertisement
after advertisement
before reaching
the video. Verb problem
watching
However
, I do no
think that not paying attention to Correct your spelling
not
repetetive
Correct your spelling
repetitive
adds
has no influence on Correct your spelling
ads
people
's shopping. In fact, they can not protect their subcouncious
from Correct your spelling
subconscious
repeting
Correct your spelling
repeating
advertisement
.
Others, Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
on the other hand
, argues
that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to shop as they create new needs. We see some new Correct subject-verb agreement
argue
product
through Fix the agreement mistake
products
adds
and we start thinking that we need that product for some Correct your spelling
ads
reasons
. Fix the agreement mistake
reason
For example
, evey
year, Apple introduces its new Correct your spelling
every
Iphone
with little changes made Correct your spelling
iPhone
on
the previous model. They display brand new Change preposition
to
phone
through advertising and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
people
start thining
they need to change their Correct your spelling
thinking
phone
with Fix the agreement mistake
phones
that
latest Correct determiner usage
the
Iphone
. I agree with Correct your spelling
iPhone
this
argument because as discussed above, advertising creates new needs for people
and eventually they persuade people
to buy things.
In conclusion, although
people
are expose
to advertising every day, it is not possible to avoid its effects Change the verb form
are exposed
subcounciously
. Correct your spelling
subconsciously
Therefore
I beleive
that Correct your spelling
believe
advertisement
is very successful as it creates new needs for us.Replace the word
advertising
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