scientits and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists? to what extent do you agree?

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digital advancements,

scientists

and

technology

experts

are springing up recently.

While

some think

scientists

and

technology

experts

seem to be more important in modern society than

musicians

and

artists

, I find

musicians

and

artists

modern value, so I just partly agree with it. On the one hand,

scientists

and

technology

experts

improve human

lifestyle

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innovation

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of technological and scientific research.

For example

, the

technology

of Artificial intelligence

is become

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popular,

people

can use

this

technology

to solve their problems immediately

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Students can use Chat GDP to answer their academic questions

instead

of asking teachers so that have

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efficient learning style.

Hence

scientists

and

technology

experts

have a certain value in enhancing

people

's quality of life.

On the other hand

,

artists

and

musicians

also

play a significant role in the society. Art and music both are created by the creativity of

people

which cannot be replaced by computers.

Artists

and

musicians

not only provide entertainment and joy to

people

's lives

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but

also

express messages to everyone.

For example

, some

people

will release stress and negative emotions by listening to music or painting.

Therefore

they have good growth and personal development and foster critical things and cultural understanding.

As a result

, they would build a more harmonious society. In conclusion, there is no doubt that

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benefits from

scientists

and

technology

experts

, the value of

artists

and

musicians

cannot seem negligible.