Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years. Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you. In the letter: - Explain how much you have missed your friend - Describe how you feel about your friend’s return - Give reasons that you and your friend should share a home
Dear Ramesh, Hope you are doing well, I am feeling extremely excited to know that you are returning back to our city
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I am writing Replace the punctuation
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...
this
mail to suggest you to
stay with me once you are in Fix the infinitive
apply
city
.I think, it it really a long time ago we had seen each other. I still remember our college Add an article
the city
day
when we used to stay in Fix the agreement mistake
days
same
flat and travel to college on the same bike. Correct article usage
the same
Furthermore
, During our term holidays
we used to travel and visit multiple cities. I really missed all those days and fun. Sometimes, I feel extremely emotional Add a comma
holidays,
on
recalling all those days. But, I am very happy to know you returning back and planning to settle here.It will be an Icing on the cakeChange preposition
about
,
if we unite again and plan to stay in the same city. Remove the comma
apply
Therefore
, I would like to recommend you stay with me in my apartment. Furthermore
to tell you, I m
staying alone at my place and you will Correct your spelling
I'm
be having
enough space to keep yourself comfortable. we can have all the fun which we used to have during our college days. Wrong verb form
have
Consequently
, we can have numerous fun filled
activities during our weekend.I will be On my toes to hear from you.Best Add a hyphen
fun-filled
regardsRajiv
Correct your spelling
regards Rajiv
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the ideas are logically sequenced. The letter could benefit from more structured paragraphs separating the expression of emotions, details of the friend's return, and reasons to stay together. Use clear topic sentences to improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
The letter should start with a more personal and engaging greeting, such as "Dear [Friend's Name]," instead of a generic opening. Additionally, the closing lacks a warm sign-off that could strengthen the personal tone of a letter to a friend. Consider using phrases like "Warm regards" or "Eagerly awaiting your reply".
task achievement
Fully address all three bullet points in the task. While the letter touches on each, it could delve deeper into how much the writer has missed the friend, the excitement of the friend's return, and more compelling reasons for sharing a home. Expanding on these points with specific examples or experiences would enhance the task achievement.
task achievement
The letter sometimes veers into a formal tone inappropriate for writing to a close friend. Slang, idiomatic expressions, and a more conversational tone would be more suitable in this context. It's important to maintain the friendly and informal tone throughout the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,