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people
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our children and adults as it makes them Change the word
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motivates
people
to engage in criminal activities who have Use synonyms
propensity
towards crime.
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a propensity
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shows or movies as their role Use synonyms
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models
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fact that children, Change preposition
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for example
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their Change preposition
by
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favourite
TV
character.
Another factor why violent Use synonyms
TV
serials and movies could lead to aggression is because they have the ability to Use synonyms
pursuade
criminal-minded Correct your spelling
persuade
people
to resort to crimes. Use synonyms
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find pleasure Use synonyms
while
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, In my country, there was a Linking Words
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kid who testified to police in an Add a hyphen
14-year-old
interogation
that he was Correct your spelling
interrogation
invloved
in Correct your spelling
involved
commiting
five murders of toddlers because he found Correct your spelling
committing
a
great pleasure Correct article usage
apply
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while
watching them struggling for their Change preposition
in
life
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lives
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, I would argue that If successful athletes, Linking Words
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as Ronaldo, could inspire Linking Words
people
to take up sports, I anticipate that, Use synonyms
likewise
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on Fix the agreement mistake
content
TV
can motivate Use synonyms
people
having criminal Use synonyms
mindset
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mindsets
of
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to
criminal
world.
In conclusion, I will stand by my stance that violent and unlawful visual stories on Add an article
the criminal
TV
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is
affecting our Change the verb form
are
people
negatively. Use synonyms
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people
and it can Use synonyms
also
convince some criminal-psychic individuals to indulge in illicit Linking Words
activites
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activities
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