The line graph shows the average number of weekly patieents vivsiting four clinics of a hospital form 2010 to 2016.

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patients

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per week in four different clinics; which are

brith

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birth

control, eye,

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diabetic

and dental, of a hospital between 2010 and 2016. The units are

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in

number

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of

patients

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per year.

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, it can be clearly seen that all the

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clinic

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clinics

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experienced a gradual growth

for

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in

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patients appointment

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patient appointments

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, except for

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control

clinic

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. In terms of eye

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clinic

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,

initialy

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initially

at approximately 125

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in 2010 and

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slightly

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until 2012 before soaring between 2012 and 2016, and

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a peak at 250

in

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the end of the period.

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,

Diaberic

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Diabetic

clinic

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patients

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also

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increased,

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at just above 50 in 2010 and moderately

rose

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to about 90 in 2012,

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on

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during

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this

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period the figure

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stable until 2014. After that, between 2014 and 2016 the

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patients visit

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number of patient visits

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started to

went

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up and

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around 180

patients

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. Regarding the other two clinics left, the Birth control

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patients

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appointment

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appointments

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fluctuated

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trend,

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at just under 250 and the biggest number compared

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to another

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another clinics

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another clinic

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. In the following year, the figure

encountred

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encountered

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climbed

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at nearly 280 before hitting

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trough at just below 200.

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back to

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rose again from 2014 to 2016 and

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precisely

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250.

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, the Dental

clinic

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also

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witnessed a similar trend, in 2010 started at exactly 100

patients

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then

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dropped modestly in 2012 at almost

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half and started to

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again until reached 140

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2016.