You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned.

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Introduction

Dear Sir/

Maddam

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Madam

Body paragraph 1

I hope you 're well I am

writting

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writing

to you about

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an unsastisfy

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unsastisfy

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satisfy

that I bought from your

store

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apply

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last

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week.

Body paragraph 2

I had an excellent shopping at your

store

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and I decided to

bought

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buy

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ABC

jacket

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. I checked and

pleased

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was pleased

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about it. But when I came

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apply

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home, I again tried it and I discovered a tear inside it.

Body paragraph 3

I immediately contacted to

Store

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mechandiser

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merchandiser

merchandise

but she could not resolve

this

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issue. She explained to me

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apply

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because

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that because

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I clearly inspected

this

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jacket

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at the

Store

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apply

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that

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the

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tear

was

Verb problem

did

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not

belonged

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belong

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store

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the store

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. I

ensure

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ensured

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that

problem

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the problem

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was

happended

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happened

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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factory. I

also

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send

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sent

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tearing pictures in

attched

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attached

files. You may check and evaluate it.

Body paragraph 4

I would like your

store

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replace

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to replace

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new

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my new

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jacket

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for me. I really like

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jacket

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the jacket

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brand and want to own one for

this

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winter. I hope you

well-know

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know

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this

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situation

and

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well and

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feed

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get

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back to me as soon. Thanks for your consideration.

Body paragraph 5

Best regards,

Conclusion

Bui Thanh Tung

k2englishcenter

Dec 19, 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

merchandise
damaged
disappointment
anticipation
wear and tear
return policy
customer service
frustration
defective
dispute
resolution
trust
loyalty
compensation
refund
exchange
warranty
product quality
consumer rights

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