The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work.
The chart below illustrates the information about the surveys of absenteeism in certain
nation
from Fix the agreement mistake
nations
Euro
during 2000, 2005 and 2010. The investigation presents the Correct article usage
the Euro
causes
why
employees did not go to work.
Change preposition
of why
Overall
, there are many differents
in the percentages of the Correct your spelling
differences
reasons
for absence. While
the number of healthy reasons
was the highest, the opposite was seen in the stress.
Starting with sick causes
and necessary role in family
were the regular Add an article
the family
reasons
. With nearly 45% of illness causes
in 2000 was the largest, followed by the figure in 2005 at 40%, and 2010 less 10% than 2000 at 35%, and Wrong verb form
caused
had
of total Unnecessary verb
apply
of
rate was majority at 114% . Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, database
in family responsibilities, Correct article usage
the database
similarly
, with the highest belong
to 2000, Change the verb form
belongs
accounted
for 23%, moreWrong verb form
accounting
3
% than both 2005 and 2010 which Change preposition
than 3
were
shared the same level.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, person
needs, unexpected problems and stress were less common Replace the word
personal
reasons
. The stressful causes
with the number total of 24% Fix the agreement mistake
cause
was
Change the verb form
were
minority
, which Add an article
a minority
the minority
just
nearly one-sixth of the most popular reason. Add a missing verb
is just
Additionally
, for person
needs in 2010 at 24%, more 10% and 3% than 2000 and 2005 respectively. Replace the word
personal
Further more
, unpredictable issues had the figures Correct your spelling
Furthermore
of
2005 and 2010 were approximately Change preposition
for
at
14%, Change preposition
apply
it
doubled Correct pronoun usage
apply
than
7% Change preposition
to
of
2000.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words causes, reasons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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