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The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work.

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The chart below illustrates the information about the surveys of absenteeism in certain
nation
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nations
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 from
Euro
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the Euro
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 during 2000, 2005 and 2010. The investigation presents the
causes
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 employees did not go to work.
Overall
, there are many
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differences
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 in the percentages of the
reasons
 for absence.
While
 the number of healthy
reasons
 was the highest, the opposite was seen in the stress. Starting with sick
causes
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 were the regular
reasons
. With nearly 45% of illness
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 in 2000 was the largest, followed by the figure in 2005 at 40%, and 2010 less 10% than 2000 at 35%, and
had
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of total
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rate was majority at 114% .
Moreover
,
database
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 in family responsibilities,
similarly
, with the highest
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 to 2000,
accounted
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 for 23%, more
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than 3
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% than both 2005 and 2010 which
were
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shared the same level.
On the other hand
,
person
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 needs, unexpected problems and stress were less common
reasons
. The stressful
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cause
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 with the number total of 24%
was
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minority
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a minority
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, which
just
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 nearly one-sixth of the most popular reason.
Additionally
, for
person
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 needs in 2010 at 24%, more 10% and 3% than 2000 and 2005 respectively.
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, unpredictable issues had the figures
of
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for
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 2005 and 2010 were approximately
at
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14%,
it
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doubled
than
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 7%
of
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in
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 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words causes, reasons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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