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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island betwen 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island betwen 2010 and 2017
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The line graph illustrates how many visitors went to a certain Caribbean
island
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 between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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,it can clearly be seen that all types of visitor accommodation increased from 2010 to 2017 in a particular Caribbean
island
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. In detail,
tourists
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 staying on cruise ships were 0.25
million
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 in numbers in 2010.
This
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number
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 rose to 0.5
million
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 in 2011.But in 2012,it decreased to 0.25
million
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 again.After that, visitors
number
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 to a certain
island
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,who were staying on cruise ships gradually increased to 2
million
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 in 2017.
Tourists
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 were staying on the
island
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,0.75
million
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 visitors were presented on
an
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the
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island
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 in 2010 and the same numbers were in
2011also
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2011
.
Then
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 the numbers increased sharply to 1.5
million
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 in 2013 and remained 1.5
million
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 till 2015.In 2016,
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tourists
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the tourists
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 figure decreased to 1.25
million
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 but again reached 1.5
million
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 in 2017. The total
number
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 of
tourists
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 was 1
million
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 in 2010 and the
number
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 increased periodically to 2.75
million
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 in 2016.In 2017,it jumped to 3.5
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, tourists, million, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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