The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the revenue from a
caffeteria
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cafeteria
inside a workplace facility during a usual working day.
Overall
, the most consumed drink is coffee and the
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is tea.
Moreover
, the most eaten food is pastries and the least is sandwiches.
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During
Duirng
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Throughout
the day, employees
remain
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continue
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drinking coffee,
in
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which
it
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got
a
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high as 265 income between 7:30 and 10:30 in the morning, and
then
slightly dropped into 185 between 10:30 am and 2:30 pm,
then
scoring another sales drop between 2:30 and 5:30 145, and eventuallyfollowed by a clear raise between 5:30 and 8:30 in the evening. Meanwhile, the recieved money from tea trading vary from 110 between 7:30 and 80:30 in the morning,
then
recording a downward figure to 50 between 10:30 am and 2:30 pm, and another drop with 35 between 2:30 pm and 5:30,
while
scoring a drastic upward graph between 5:30 and 8:30 reaching to 75. In terms of preferred food, the amount of pastries refunds were 275 in the early morning between 7:30 and 8:30,
on the other hand
, the sandwiches refunds at the same period were only 50.
while
buying pastries between 10:30 am and 2:30 reduced to 95, buying sandwiches increased to 200 during the same time.
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