The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004
The line graph illustrates the weekly per-capita fish,
lamb
, chicken, and
beef
consumption
in a specific European country from 1979 until 2004.
Overall
,
while
eating
beef
and
lamb
had a gradual decrease in Europe, Chicken increased rapidly during the 25 years.
In contrast
, Fish
consumption
remained almost steady. The highest meat consumed in 1979 was
beef
, which accounted for 210.
Then
, there was a slight fluctuation in 1984, about 240
grams
, before dwindling until the end of the period, roughly 100
grams
. Almost similar to
lamb
consumption
, where 150
grams
of
lamb
was eaten at the beginning of the period and
then
kept decreasing with nearly half of the total
beef
consumed
at the end
.
On the other hand
, Chicken
consumption
soared significantly from roughly 150 to almost 250
grams
, the highest of different meats. Fish was the least favourite meat, hovering between the 49 to 50
grams
range.
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