The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004
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The line graph illustrates the weekly per-capita fish,
lamb
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, chicken, and
beef
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consumption
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in a specific European country from 1979 until 2004.
Overall
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,
while
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eating
beef
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and
lamb
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had a gradual decrease in Europe, Chicken increased rapidly during the 25 years.
In contrast
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, Fish
consumption
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remained almost steady. The highest meat consumed in 1979 was
beef
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, which accounted for 210.
Then
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, there was a slight fluctuation in 1984, about 240
grams
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, before dwindling until the end of the period, roughly 100
grams
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. Almost similar to
lamb
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consumption
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, where 150
grams
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of
lamb
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was eaten at the beginning of the period and
then
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kept decreasing with nearly half of the total
beef
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consumed
at the end
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.
On the other hand
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, Chicken
consumption
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soared significantly from roughly 150 to almost 250
grams
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, the highest of different meats. Fish was the least favourite meat, hovering between the 49 to 50
grams
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range.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words lamb, beef, consumption, grams with synonyms.
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