FEW PEOPLE DEVOTE TIME TO HOBBIES NOWADAYS. SAY WHY YOU THINK THIS IS THE CASE AND WHAT EFFECT THIS HAS ON THE INDIVIDUAL AND SOCIETY IN GENERAL.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea to strengthen coherence. While some paragraphs handle this well, others can seem unfocused with multiple ideas interwoven.
task achievement
While the ideas are mostly relevant to the task, ensure you fully address all parts of the prompt, including more explicit discussion on the effects of the decline in hobby engagement on society, which was only touched upon briefly.
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