The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
books
males and females read at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall
, the number of books
read by men
has experienced gradual growth.
Change preposition
At
In
the beginning of the period women read more than Change preposition
At
men
, about 5000 and 3000 books
, respectively.
By 2011, the amount of books
read by men
has seen slight
increase, Add an article
a slight
while
women read two times more than men
at that time.But after that men
started to read more and this
number sharply went up.
It can be seen that number
of Correct article usage
the number
books
read by both gender
was equalled Change to a plural noun
genders
at
10000 in 2013. After that, the amount of Change preposition
to
book
read by women has seen Fix the agreement mistake
books
considerable
decrease and by 2014 it was almost on the level of 2012.Add an article
a considerable
Whereas
men
started to read more books
and it hit the peak in 2014, with a figure of 14000.Submitted by forcookiearu on
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