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Band 6.5

Topic: Some people say it is time to say goodbye to reading books with real paper because e-readers and e-books are available. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that a group of individuals believe it is high time to farewell to reading paper-based
books
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 the availability of
e-readers
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as well as
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e-
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books
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 in
this
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 modern age. I completely agree with the statement.
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 with, there are a large number of advantages of reading through digital
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such
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 as
e-readers
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 and
e-
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books
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.
Although
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 the digital
book
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 is costly in terms of price, it is very convenient to carry.
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, the digital
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 helps us to ensure an eco-friendly environment because thousands of trees are being cut across the world every year by paper-based
books
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 which has a great number of negative effects on our future generation.
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, environment-related pollution has been increasing day by day at an alarming rate in Bangladesh for the
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 two decades.
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,
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 lovers have been grappling with the storage of paper-based
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 inadequate space.
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However
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However,
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 a person can read a digital
book
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 through various online platforms because some websites have been providing the facilities to read
e-readers
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 or
e-
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books
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 free of cost.
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, people prefer to visit www. openlibrary. org where thousands of
books
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 are available to read as per their interest.
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, the page of paper-based
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 could be torn after a few years
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 digital
books
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 don't have
this
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 kind of problem as these are archived in the online platforms. In conclusion, considering the factors discussed above, I believe
e-
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books
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 and
e-readers
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 are much more user-friendly
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 easier to access from anywhere than reading
books
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 with real paper.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the transition between ideas and paragraphs flows smoothly to enhance the structural quality of the essay. Use a wider range of cohesive devices such as conjunctions and synonyms to improve the connections between sentences and clarity of your argument.
task achievement
Each body paragraph should ideally begin with a clear topic sentence, followed by explanations and examples to support the main point. This structure needs to be evident throughout to maintain task achievement at a high level. Including a counter-argument or contrasting viewpoint could also add depth to your response.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nostalgic value
  • sensory experience
  • convenience
  • portability
  • digital age
  • preservation
  • environment
  • reading comprehension
  • retention
  • accessibility
  • disabilities
  • tradition
  • libraries
  • interactive
  • multimedia content
  • economic aspects
  • digital eyestrain
  • blue light exposure
  • preservation of culture
  • durability
  • longevity
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