The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the
number
of travellers who went travelling abroad from 1990 to 2005 from five different continents, which was counted in millions
.
Overall
, the total number
of international travellers gradually increased throughout the given period. In addition
, the activities of travelling were mostly done by European citizens, while
least from
Middle Eastern Change preposition
by
people
.
In 1990, there were 448.9 million people
from the total population in the world who went abroad for vacations. Among those travellers, 280.2 million of them were Europeans and more than one-third of the total population was dominated by Americans and Asians-Pacific. The popularity for
travelling overseas increased gradually until the end of the period, as the Change preposition
of
number
of European pupils doubled from the previous number
until it reached 400.2 million. Different cases applied to the other two countries, nevertheless
, since the total folks
who are going for abroad holidays from Asia and the Pacific mainland outnumbered the Americans for 135.8 Correct quantifier usage
number of folks
millions
.
Change to singular
million
Albeit
in the end there were almost 700 Change preposition
Although
millions
Change to singular
million
people
going for international travelling, some continents, like Africa and Middle
East, only accounted Correct article usage
the Middle
below
than 20 Rephrase
for less
millions
for that occasion, unless for Africans, the Change to singular
million
number
almost reached 30 millions
Change to singular
million
people
in
the end of the period.Change the preposition
at
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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