The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the changes in sales of five different phone companies in the world within a 4 years period from 2009 to 2013
Overall
, it can be seen that the two dominant companies experienced a position replacement. The majority of the surveyed companies showed upward trends with only two exceptions being Nokia
and LG.
Having overtaken the worldwide market in 2009 with nearly 450 millions
products purchased, Change to singular
million
Nokia
witnessed a drastically declined after 2011, ended
at Wrong verb form
ending
apporximately
half of its peak 4 years before. Correct your spelling
approximately
Similarly
, LG with the beginning statistics of over 120 units sold, which is about one-fourth that of Nokia
at the same time. In the following years, LG user’s
Fix the agreement mistake
users’
consumpsion graduallly
decreased by around 50 Correct your spelling
consumption gradually
millions
units.
Change to singular
million
In contrast
to the negative growth seen at
the former champion in the market, Samsung whose starting point stood at around 30 Change preposition
by
millions
sales fewer than Change to singular
million
Nokia
in 2013, dramatically surged up to twice the amount of phone
, surpassing its counterpart’s highest point at sharply 450 Fix the agreement mistake
phones
millions
phones sold in 2013. Apple Change to singular
million
also
followed the same rise, gaining over 350% growth and ended
at roughly 150 Wrong verb form
ending
millions
units purchases. Change to singular
million
In contrast
to the former two’s skyrocketting
, ZTE despite Correct your spelling
skyrocketing
also
witnessed
growth, still Wrong verb form
witnessing
sood
at below 100 Correct your spelling
stood
millions
sales with Change to singular
million
minor
increase.Correct article usage
a minor
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nokia, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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