In some cultures, children are often told that they can achive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, some adults teach their children that if they work harder

then

they will get payback.

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way has some benefits and

also

a few drawbacks, the following content will outline the

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Firstly

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effective method to encourage

kids

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because they will enhance their proficiency

while

chasing the goal.

For example

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lesson is always a complicated problem for students, some of them give up during learning because lack of

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confidence

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their abilities.

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, if they believed they

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obtain

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score

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or

practice

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more,

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to

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the lesson harder.

As a result

, they are willing to learn by themselves.

Nevertheless

, talent is more important than effort in certain fields,

therefore

, children might face more failures and lead to

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confident

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than previous.

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most of their time

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acquire

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level.

In contrast

, a few of them are born

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this

field, they reach higher

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more rapidly

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less

practice

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this

moment, the former

kids

could feel frustrated when they understand the gap between them and the latter

kids

.

Therefore

,

this

could be an obvious drawback for certain students. In conclusion, the message could encourage people easily, because they believe the final result could be influenced by their effort.

However

,

this

could

also

be a shortage when people realise their time and energy spent throughout the process could be useless. Personally, I think the ways of teaching need to be

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categorised

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to different children

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and find the appropriate method to teach each of them.