In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Recent times have, no doubt, seen a phenomenon among adolescents being employed during their studies in multiple countries.

While

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brings varied benefits for the group, it poses a few negative impacts on other

age

workers.

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essay is going to

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hash out

these positives and will mention the downsides as well.

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for

this

trend to be a positive one are many; the most significant one is the practical learning for young workers alongside reading the textbooks. To be more clear, being employed

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young

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age

ushers in multifarious opportunities to observe and improve the prominent skills they require not only in their own fields of employment but in every aspect of a civilized life.

For instance

,

statstics

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statistics

done by

Hardvard

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Harvard

University (2020), revealed that more than two third of teenagers acquired social skills

such

as communication and teamwork

while

being

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factory

worker

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workers

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who

otherwise

had remained absorbed in themselves earlier as reported by their parents. Another vital reason is the availability of active and cheap labour for employers. Companies

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when they receive employees who work faster and work

on

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pay rate;

whereas

their counterparts are paid as per their qualifications and years of experience in the field even if they are older comparatively.

This

can be exemplified by the statement provided by the CEO of Hiroshima company that

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student workers proved to raise the company's revenue

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the year 2021 by 23

percent

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since they work without any pay rate demands. On the other side,

while

the trend undoubtedly brings potential

ourcomes

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outcomes

for employers and young employees, other

poplulations

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populations

;

yound

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young

adults and older ones are greatly affected as

this

certainly lowers the

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of job opportunities for them

along with

soaring the probability of replacement of older employees with new trained young ones ahead of their retirement;

consequently

surging the income and job insecurities of

this

populace. To recapitulate,

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working at

young

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age

prepares the baseline for their bright careers,

however

, the

impacts

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impact

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this notion

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this

notions has on other

age

groups

,

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can be ignored by no means.