The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the lifespan of salmon from the beginning egg to being mature
fish
. Overall
, there are six stages and three categories of habitas
where the salmon lives over the Correct your spelling
habitats
habitat
habits
fish
developing which can be shown in the picture.
First of all, the first stage has happening
in the river when the adults produce and incubate the egg after having Wrong verb form
happens
mate
. The embryo will appear when the egg Add an article
a mate
emerge
and Change the verb form
emerges
keep
growing in size in the freshwater rearing. The salmons will be flowing the water to the estuary as a new Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
habitats
for the young Correct the article-noun agreement
habitat
fish
and still develop there.
The next stage after leaving the estuary rearing is migrating to the ocean which is the third places
of the cycle. Fix the agreement mistake
place
Still
Add a comma
Still,
in
growing in the sea, the salmon transforms Change preposition
apply
to
a mature Change preposition
into
fish
. The fish
will remain in the ocean until the mating time is coming when the fish
will return to the river and put their eggs.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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