The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram depicts the lifespan of salmon from the beginning egg to being mature

fish

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.

Overall

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, there are six stages and three categories of

habitas

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habitats

habitat

habits

where the salmon lives over the

fish

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developing which can be shown in the picture. First of all, the first stage

has happening

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happens

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in the river when the adults produce and incubate the egg after having

mate

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a mate

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. The embryo will appear when the egg

emerge

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emerges

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and

keep

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keeps

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growing in size in the freshwater rearing. The salmons will be flowing the water to the estuary as a new

habitats

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habitat

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for the young

fish

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and still develop there. The next stage after leaving the estuary rearing is migrating to the ocean which is the third

places

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place

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of the cycle.

Still

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Still,

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in

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apply

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growing in the sea, the salmon transforms

to

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into

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a mature

fish

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. The

fish

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will remain in the ocean until the mating time is coming when the

fish

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will return to the river and put their eggs.