The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the way in which
bricks
are manufactured so as to be used in the building industry.
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Overall
, it is clearly observable that Linking Words
this
process consists of seven distinct steps, commencing with digging and culminating with transferring products to the industry sectors.
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To begin
with, a digger is utilized in order to collect clay, which acts as a raw material in Linking Words
this
procedure. Afterwards, the collected clay goes through the next step, where a metal gridLinking Words
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, as well as a roller,
as well as
a roller are employed to separate bigger particles from the fine ones that are used in the following phases. In the subsequent stage, sand and water should be added to the clay, and Linking Words
then
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this
mixture either undergoes a Linking Words
molding
process or goes through a cutting step.
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moulding
Next,
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bricks
are held in an oven for 24-48 hours, making drying possible. Once Use synonyms
this
has been done, two separate heat treatments are carried out: the first one in the temperature range of 200–980 °C and the second one at a relatively higher temperature (870–1300 °C). Linking Words
Subsequently
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bricks
are kept in a chamber, providing sufficient time (48–72 hours) for the cooling process. In the two final stages, manufactured Use synonyms
bricks
are packed and delivered to the building industry by trucks.Use synonyms
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