The table below illustrates information about age, average income of a person and population that is below the poverty line in California, Utal and Florida.
The table below illustrates information about age,
average
income of a person and population Add an article
the average
that is
below the poverty line in California
, Utal
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Utah
Florida
.
Overall
, Utal
has the largest number of under 18 Correct your spelling
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year
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years
Florida
has the majority of people
who are aged over 60. The average income of a person and those who are below the poverty line are highest in California
and Florida
.
Looking at the table in more detail, Utal has the most people
who are under 18 the figure being 28%. For California
and Florida
, the numbers are relatively the same at 17 and 16%. Conversly
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Conversely
Florida
has more people
who are over the age of 60 at 23%. This
is nearly 3 times the statistic for Utal,which is 8 and nearly double the figure for California
at 13.
The average earning is highest in California
followed closely by Florida
, the numbers respectively being 23,000 and 22,000.Utal trails behind at 17,000.However
, there are the least amount of people
below the poverty line in Utal, 9% compared to California
and Florida
which are at 12 and 16.Submitted by abeera2012 on
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