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The table below illustrates information about age, average income of a person and population that is below the poverty line in California, Utal and Florida.

The table below illustrates information about age, average income of a person and population that is below the poverty line in California, Utal and Florida.
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The table below illustrates information about age,
average
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the average
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 income of a person and population
that is
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 below the poverty line in
California
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,
Utal
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Utah
 and
Florida
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.
Overall
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,
Utal
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Utah
 has the largest number of under 18
year
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 old’s, whilst
Florida
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 has the majority of
people
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 who are aged over 60. The average income of a person and those who are below the poverty line are highest in
California
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 and
Florida
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. Looking at the table in more detail, Utal has the most
people
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 who are under 18 the figure being 28%. For
California
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 and
Florida
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, the numbers are relatively the same at 17 and 16%.
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Conversely
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Florida
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 has more
people
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 who are over the age of 60 at 23%.
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 is nearly 3 times the statistic for Utal,which is 8 and nearly double the figure for
California
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 at 13. The average earning is highest in
California
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 followed closely by
Florida
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, the numbers respectively being 23,000 and 22,000.Utal trails behind at 17,000.
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, there are the least amount of
people
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 below the poverty line in Utal, 9% compared to
California
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 and
Florida
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 which are at 12 and 16.
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