The table below illustrates information about age, average income of a person and population that is below the poverty line in California, Utal and Florida.

The table below illustrates information about age, average income of a person and population that is below the poverty line in California, Utal and Florida.
The table below illustrates information about age,
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the average
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income of a person and population
that is
below the poverty line in
California
,
Utal
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Utah
and
Florida
.
Overall
,
Utal
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Utah
has the largest number of under 18
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old’s, whilst
Florida
has the majority of
people
who are aged over 60. The average income of a person and those who are below the poverty line are highest in
California
and
Florida
. Looking at the table in more detail, Utal has the most
people
who are under 18 the figure being 28%. For
California
and
Florida
, the numbers are relatively the same at 17 and 16%.
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Conversely
,
Florida
has more
people
who are over the age of 60 at 23%.
This
is nearly 3 times the statistic for Utal,which is 8 and nearly double the figure for
California
at 13. The average earning is highest in
California
followed closely by
Florida
, the numbers respectively being 23,000 and 22,000.Utal trails behind at 17,000.
However
, there are the least amount of
people
below the poverty line in Utal, 9% compared to
California
and
Florida
which are at 12 and 16.
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