The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plan illustrates the previous layout of the floor in a public central library and how it has changed since 20 years ago.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that all the rooms and the centre area have been relocated to different places.
Whereas
, the main entrance is still in the same location.
According to
the two plans, a cafe and a computer room have been constructed on the two sides of the entrance.
Next,
in the main hall, the tables and chairs have disappeared and on the left
side
, all reference books have been located.
In contrast
, on the other
side
, there is a region for adult fiction books which is restricted as compared to the past.
Additionally
, the information desk and self-service machines are placed near the previous part. On the north
side
of the floor, the region for children is designed with some sofas, fiction books and storytelling events.
However
, on the right
side
, the room is limited and it belongs to the lecture room and meetings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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