The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line chart illustrates the data of
inquiries
received by the travel agent information
office in one city over a half year
period in 2011. Add a hyphen
half-year
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of inquiries
received by
in person and Change preposition
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telephone
rose significantly, Change preposition
by telephone
while
the rate of inquiries
received by letter or email decline
sharply during the period.
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declined
inquiries
received by
in person went up significantly Change preposition
apply
at
400 Change preposition
from
information
to above 1,800 advice. Moreover
, by telephone for
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apply
inquiries
received rose gradually from above 8000 information
to 1,400 information
.
Regarding to
the Remove the preposition
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inquiries
received by letter or email declined sharply at
around 600 advice to under 400 advice between January to Change preposition
from
Juny
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June
in
2011.Change preposition
apply
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