The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line chart illustrates the data of
inquiries
received by the travel agent Use synonyms
information
office in one city over a Use synonyms
half year
period in 2011. Add a hyphen
half-year
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the number of Linking Words
inquiries
received Use synonyms
by
in person and Change preposition
apply
telephone
rose significantly, Change preposition
by telephone
while
the rate of Linking Words
inquiries
received by letter or email Use synonyms
decline
sharply during the period.
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declined
inquiries
received Use synonyms
by
in person went up significantly Change preposition
apply
at
400 Change preposition
from
information
to above 1,800 advice. Use synonyms
Moreover
, by telephone Linking Words
for
Change preposition
apply
inquiries
received rose gradually from above 8000 Use synonyms
information
to 1,400 Use synonyms
information
.
Regarding Use synonyms
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
inquiries
received by letter or email declined sharply Use synonyms
at
around 600 advice to under 400 advice between January to Change preposition
from
Juny
Correct your spelling
June
in
2011.Change preposition
apply
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