DOCTORS, NURSED AND TEACHERS MAKE A GREAT CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY AND SHOULD BE PAYER MORE THAN ENTERTAINMENT AND SPORTS CELEBRITIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

One of the burning issues of today's

society

is the huge gap between

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income and the salary of important jobs

such

as

teachers

and healthcare agents. I am totally convinced that they should be

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more than entertainers. there are many aspects that

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me agree with

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statement. Heath agents and

teachers

are the roots of

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society

's

well being

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. the former cures the physical and mental diseases and the latter grows the spirit of children, who are the foundation of having a better nation.

Therefore

, we can assume that

teachers

are responsible for

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being of the soul of the

society

. We can say Entertainment and sports are meaningless in a sick population; So, the former group should be more appreciated and more

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. Another viewpoint is the

amout

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amount

of effort and affection they should put into work.

doctors

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and

teachers

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job is to care about individuals and treat them with all their might.

Hence

, more effort and more patience

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required

in

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it to be done

good

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enough and without error. If

and

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entertainer or a

sport

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celebrity makes a mistake, nothing horrible happens. But if a teacher or a doctor

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so, it would be a threat to

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life or

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future of a person. To make it brief, doctors, nurses and

teachers

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job

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is

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more important than every other major in

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society

, including celebrities and

sportmans

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sportsmen

sportsman

. They should highly

being

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respected and they

most

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have the highest salary range in

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country. because as mentioned, their occupation is the fundamental of other jobs to be done.