The chart below shows the results of a svrvey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Austrian cities
The chart describes a survey result about people's buying and drinking rates of
coffee
and tea
in five Austrian cities.
Overall
, the percentage of drinking and buying coffee
or tea
was fluctuated
; Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
Although
, the rate
of fresh coffee
and instant coffee
buying and drinking in five cities in Australia was
varied.
In Sydney, the percentage of people who bought and consumed Unnecessary verb
apply
coffee
or tea
was around 60%, while
in Melbourne, it was 64%. In Brisbane city
, the Capitalize word
City
rate
was approximately 56%, while
it was around 49% in Adelaide city
. In Hobart city
, there has been a steady increase in the buying and drinking of Capitalize word
City
coffee
or tea
by 64%.
The rate
of buying and drinking fresh coffee
in Sydney and Melbourne was around 44% and 41% respectively in the last
4 weeks but in the other two countries Brisbane and Adelaide
the rates were almost Add a comma
Adelaide,
same
Correct article usage
the same
while
Hobart was near 40%.
In Sydney, the rate
of buying and drinking instant coffee
was above 45%. However
, it is expected to increase gradually. Melbourne saw a decline of almost 49% and Brisbane saw a slight rise to 53%, but Adelaide saw a 50% decline. Again, In Hobart city
was around 54%.Submitted by mjifinanceassistant on
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