The chart below shows the results of a svrvey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Austrian cities

The chart describes a survey result about people's buying and drinking rates of

coffee

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and

tea

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in five Austrian cities.

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, the percentage of drinking and buying

coffee

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or

tea

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was fluctuated

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, the

rate

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of fresh

coffee

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and instant

coffee

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buying and drinking in five cities in Australia

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varied. In Sydney, the percentage of people who bought and consumed

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or

tea

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was around 60%,

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in Melbourne, it was 64%. In Brisbane

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, the

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was approximately 56%,

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it was around 49% in Adelaide

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. In Hobart

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, there has been a steady increase in the buying and drinking of

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or

tea

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by 64%. The

rate

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of buying and drinking fresh

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in Sydney and Melbourne was around 44% and 41% respectively in the

last

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4 weeks but in the other two countries Brisbane and

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the rates were almost

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Hobart was near 40%. In Sydney, the

rate

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of buying and drinking instant

coffee

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was above 45%.

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, it is expected to increase gradually. Melbourne saw a decline of almost 49% and Brisbane saw a slight rise to 53%, but Adelaide saw a 50% decline. Again, In Hobart

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was around 54%.