The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of money
that
collected and spent by a children's organization in the United States in 2016. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, the primary source of money collected through food donations and community contributions made a significant amount. However
, the main expenditure item was program services in 2016.
The children
charity collected almost $53 million and 600 thousand and the vast majority of income Change noun form
children's
made
by donated food with nearly 87% in 2016. Add a missing verb
was made
While
community contributions to the income was
just over a tenth, program revenue helped around only a minor proportion of 2.2%. The total Change the verb form
were
of
remaining sources Change preposition
apply
such
as investment income, government grants and other sources only contributed an insignificant fraction.
A drastic amount of the revenue spent
on program services with 95.8% ofAdd a missing verb
was spent
$
53,224,896 expenditure in 2016. Fundraising Correct article usage
the $
event
and management and general were nearly 3% and 2% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
events
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