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The table below gives information about the percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia between 1989 and 2009.

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The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.The
table
Use synonyms
 below gives
information
Use synonyms
 about the
percentage
Use synonyms
 of
workforce
Use synonyms
 employed in
six
Use synonyms
industries
Use synonyms
 in
Australia
Use synonyms
 between 1989 and 2009.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, information, percentage, workforce, six, industries, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 8 times.
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