The graph below represents the total of exports of clothing from 3 different countries over a time period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below represents the total of exports of clothing from 3 different countries over a time period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the international clothing trading (in millions of dollars) from
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separate nations – Colombia,
Japan
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, and
Myanmar
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between 1990 and 2013.
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,
Myanmar
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experienced a significant fluctuation,
while
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Japan
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and Colombia saw only a minor change in sales. From 1990 to 2011, all
three
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countries witnessed an increase in the
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of
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exports
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.
Myanmar
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did not have any trading activities at the beginning,
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, rocketed to 800 in 2000. The figures still continued climbing to reach
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approximately 920.
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, Colombia’s clothing
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rose consistently from around 450 to 650 in the first 21 years.
Japan
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. Starting the highest at nearly 580, end at the lowest at 600 in total sales. In the
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three
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years, there was a
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trend in the
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of selling clothing
oversea
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overseas
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across
three
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countries.
Japan
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and
Myanmar
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decreased slowly by 50 and 100 respectively between 2011 and 2013. At the same time,
Myanmar
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’s sales plunged by at least 600, which
then
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quickly recovered to around 420.
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