More and more people are shifting to cities from countryside. Does this have more advantages than disadvantages?

These days, the migration has increased rapidly across the globe. Many individuals move to

mega

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megacities

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cities

from

villages

. Leading a better standard of

lifestlye

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lifestyle

and obtaining more employment chances are the

benefits

of

this

phenomenon,

although

,

air

pollution

and congestion will increase in

cities

are the

drawbacks

.

Therefore

,

this

trend does not have more

benefits

than

drawbacks

.

This

essay shall discuss it briefly for the following reasons. There are some advantages of

people

migrate

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to urban places from their local areas. One of the major

benefits

is that

cities

have all the amenities like better education, healthcare and

cinima

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cinema

theatre as compared to

villages

, and

as a result

, individual's life will change with consume all these amenities when they

are moving

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to metropolitan places from

countryside

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the countryside

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.

For example

, in Mumbai

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state

of

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India, local residents have moved to Mumbai

for getting

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to get

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a better standard of

lifestyle

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life

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. Another plus point is that

cities

have enormous

MNCs

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MNC

companies in order to

migration

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people

can get more employment opportunities from it. These are the advantages of populations

move

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moving

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to

mega

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megacities

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cities

from

villages

. There are some

drawbacks

of

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to

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this

situaions

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situation

situations

. One of the major disadvantages is

that

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increasing

the

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air

pollution

level

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.

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is because

,

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already urban locations face

air

pollution

by using plenty of vehicles that release more toxic emissions.

For instance

, a recent report done by the Times of India said that numerous folks suffer the respiratory problems and lung cancer

by

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air

pollution

. Another disadvantage is that traffic congestion may increase by will increase

the

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number of vehicles, consequence,

people

have to wait long hours on

road

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the road

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to reach their destinations. These are the

drawbacks

of many

people

move

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moving

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to urban locations from

villages

.

To conclude

, leading a better lifestyle and getting more employment opportunities are the

benefits

of many

people

shift

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shifting

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to

mega

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megacities

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cities

from

countryside

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the countryside

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,

in contrast

, increasing

the

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air

pollution

and increasing

the

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traffic congestion are the

drawbacks

of

this

phenomenon.

This

trend does not have more advantages than disadvantages.