The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph gives
information
about the figure of requests
which the Tourist
Information
Office
received in a particular city during 6 months in 2011.
Overall
, there was a significant increase in the number
of enquiries
sent to the Tourist
Information
Office
via in person
and Add a hyphen
in-person
telephone
, however
, the requests
through letter or email saw a reversed trend. Most strikingly, the number
of enquiries
by direct method witnessed the most increasing number
compared with the others throughout the period shown.
At the beginning of the year, the figure of requests
sent to the Tourist
Information
Office
via telephone
stood at nearly 900 enquiries
, and it was the most popular method in January. A
Correct article usage
The
number
of enquiries
received by letter or email was less popular than telephone
, reaching just under 800 Change preposition
by telephone
enquiries
. There was the most uncommon in the figure of requests
sent in person, with slightly over 400 enquiries
.
Over a 6-month period, the Tourist
Information
Office
received some enquiries
through direct way surged, from just over 400 to peak at 1900 enquiries
, became the most common method among the three. The number
of requests
via telephone
decreased in February, but later it showed a considerable increase, reaching 1600 enquiries
in June. By contrast
, a
Correct article usage
the
number
of requests
received via letter or email saw an opposite trend, dropped
from nearly 800 to under 400 Wrong verb form
dropping
enquiries
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