The table and charts below give information on the police bugjet for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table chart illustrates the data
of
on the Change preposition
apply
police
cost;Use synonyms
whereas
the histogram charts provide information about how the Linking Words
money
was spent in small Use synonyms
area
of Britain between 2017 and 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the total Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
police
budget rose steadily, Use synonyms
while
the information Linking Words
of
how the Change preposition
on
money
was spent Use synonyms
for
salariesChange preposition
on
was
declined sharply during the period.
Looking for more details Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
in
table
, the sources of Add an article
the table
police
budget were four Use synonyms
differents
types from 2017 to 2018. Correct your spelling
different
Moreover
, the all of types Linking Words
sources
of Change preposition
of sources
police
Use synonyms
cost
increased sharply. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Similarly
, at National Linking Words
Govermant
rose from 175.5m to 177.8m and by Local Taxes, 102.3m increased from 91.2m. Correct your spelling
government
Furthermore
, from other sources went up to 85,5m by Linking Words
started
38m.
Verb problem
apply
According to
the pie charts, the Linking Words
police
budget Use synonyms
by
Change preposition
apply
how
Rephrase
apply
it
was distributed were three different types Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
the same token. Change preposition
of
However
, the Linking Words
Use synonyms
police
who spent Correct quantifier usage
number of police
money
Use synonyms
for
salaries went down sharply from 75% to 60%,Change preposition
on
while
,Linking Words
for
the person who spent Change preposition
apply
money
Use synonyms
for
technology rose sharply Change preposition
on
at
8% to 14%. Change preposition
from
In contrast
, the Linking Words
police
who spent Use synonyms
money
Use synonyms
for
buildings and transport Change preposition
on
remaind
stable at 17%.Correct your spelling
remained
remains
remain
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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