The line chart shows average attendance at the cinema among various age groups in the US from 2000 to 2011
The line chart below illustrates the average rate of attendance of various age groups going to the cinema between 2000 to 2011.
Overall
, the rate for all age groups proceeding to the cinema increased over the 11 years. The majority of those belong to the 15-24 category, whilst the least are in the 35 plus
section.
Looking at the chart in more detail, those aged between 15-24 started at 15% in the year 2000. Add a hyphen
35-plus
This
went on to rise before experiencing many fluctuations between 2006 and 2008. After 2008 more than half of this
category attended the cinema, increasing to a peak of 55 before dropping slightly to 51% in 2011. On the other hand
, the 35 and over had a figure of 2 in 2000. This
had a moderate rise throughout the years with a slight decline in 2008, before arising
again to around 10% in 2011.
The 7-14 and 25-35 year olds underwent many fluctuations over Correct your spelling
rising
this
time period. 7-14 began at 10, whilst 25-35 were at half of this
statistic. Over the course of the
11 years, both age ranges had many fluctuating patterns but eventually stopped at an equal number of 20% in 2011.Correct article usage
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